Criticisms of our preliminary piece

we asked the entirety of our media class to watch our piece a few times, with and without sound to get some feed back that we could use in our final piece.
most of the students noted that our lighting was not as good as it could have been. we used mostly natural light for our preliminary piece and so some of the shots appears a bit dark. this is something that we will defiantly amend in our final piece
the other main criticism was that we did not use many props in our piece. we did this because we wanted the clock in the graphic match to be the main focus. but evidently this did not come across as well as we'd hoped.
the good points in particular were our framing and angles, most people gave us 4s or 5s for these as well as continuity, setting, match on action and 180 degree rule. all of these got us good marks. the setting in particular was good as it was set in a college and all of the filming was done inside Central Sussex College, so it worked well as it was easily recognisable.

hollie xxx