original ideas for our story

Ideas for our piece:
• Woman doing general routine in the morning.
• Getting up and getting ready
• Going to the train station
• Getting on a train
• Looking through window
• Walking out of station
• Past poster
• Zoom in on ‘missing poster’
Don’t get to see the woman’s face properly just snippets of her to create questions as to whether she’s the one that missing E.G. seeing he feet getting onto the train/ the back of her head as she is waiting/ silhouette as she walks through tunnel out of station/ glimpse of her face in the reflection from window???

this was our original idea for our story, however, there are a few flaws witht the oringinal ideas... the begining does not really create enigma because there is nothing out of the ordinary in the opening.. also our idea of consealing the girls identity was a bad idea because the audience will not make the connection of her being the one thats missing... so we have decided to have a rethink of our ideas and come up with a different plot idea.
hollie