I have made these points elsewhere, however, this will allow you to all see them.
You have a good product. The only improvements would be to have a greater variety of shots in the long walks. They are very long and could benefit from more varierty of perspective - 3 shots rather than one. YThis also applies to where he takwews down the poster and when he is walking to the property.
Train - see if you can get the train to stop centre frame - speak to Andy.
In some ways you are a bit guilty of having raced ahead and "finished" when there were/are still improvements that you could make.
Have you recorded your sound and edited this now?
I am just a little concerned that you are spending alot of time "on line" when you could still be improoving your product.
thriller Ideas
a few original ideas of what our thriller should have... by Hollie
thriller mind map
mind map of ideas for our thriller piece.. by Hollie
a few sketches of our ideas
drawings by hollie editing by ross
Possible Title Ideas
a few ideas for possible title fonts from dafont.com.. by Hollie
Southern Rail contact Details
the card given to Jack and Arran
letter to southern rail
a letter from andrew mann to explain our reasons for wanting to use the station for filming.. by Hollie
image of location.
ross's images...we will set up the camera so that the house in the background cannot be seen when we film
damn sexy!
our amazing group.... jack photoshopped in because he was taking the picture.
Story Board.. drawn by jack...by hollie
Wednesday, 18 March 2009
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shooting day :D
our out side time laps of the the college had to enter in the clouds as there were none there
our group on location scouting loking for prime locations dont worry the bear was tame :D
story board part 1
our finalised story board!!!
story board part 2
the second part of out storyboard
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